Persuasive.Fayaz

Fayaz,

[|March 9th, 2009 at 9:25 pm]  **Fayaz V. Pd 1** Persuasive Essay “God has given you one face, and you make yourself another.” This quote explains how even though you look like someone on the outside, you decide what you are on the inside. This connects to my prompt because,now since everyone is wearing uniforms they might seem the same but we are all different. Also, now kids can’t express themselves through their clothes so that rule can be negated. This idea of uniforms is spectacular because everyone will look the same, so there is no bullying, and kids can’t wear clothes with repulsive language on them. If we have uniforms the stress of what to wear and how to wear it will vanish because everyone will look the same. Also the thoughts of looking different and being the outcast will go away. I say this because the factor of clothes when becoming popular will disappear. Finally looking cool or a geek will not be a problem because everyone is wearing uniforms. Also if we have uniforms the conflict of bullying will start to step back. I say this because the bullies in the school will run out of ideas of what to bully over, due to the fact that everyone looks the same. Also they usually are proud over the fact that they have “cool” clothes so they tease the other students of what they are wearing, so they can have a sense of pride. Uniforms will eliminate that because since the “nerds” are wearing the same clothes as the bullies, the pride that they have will start to drift away. “Change your shirt!” is what you will normally hear with kids that wear clothes with repulsive language on them. One way that uniforms can stop this is that since uniforms are school appropriate and students have to wear them, that wont be a problem. Another thing is that students can’t violate the uniforms so that wont be an issue either. Also if students get a first warning of detention for violating the uniforms they will probably back off that subject for that matter. Finally the issue of repulsive language on clothes will be eradicated with uniforms. In conclusion, uniforms are a great idea because everyone will look the same, there is no bullying, and that students can’t violate the dress code. Another thing that uniforms will do is that it will take away the anxiety of being an out cast,and it will make students fell better about themselves. All in all, the concept of uniforms will reform schools with less violence and will give students a higher self esteem.